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Man, I'm always a sucker for bittersweet endings like this.
 

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I feel like the ending could have been more unexpected than that, this was the obvious ending and they still went for it.
 
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It's a nice story but the random nude scene in page 19-20 didn't make much sense. The author could easily have worked around that.
 
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Japan representing purity and the true self/innocence/vulnerability by nudity is nothing new. I don't really see any problem with the nude scene, it clearly isn't supposed to be sexual.
 
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I feel like the nudity kinda... works? It's very direct as a visual metaphor, but the whole dream is like that. She falls in love for the first time, and flowers bloom. The girl she loves dies, and a hole opens up in her heart, she falls to pieces. Her innermost feelings are exposed, so she's exposed. It's not very complicated, but it's evocative.

Edit: I mean, it's definitely a choice, and I think it could have been handled more tastefully. And if people find it distracting and confusing, then the purpose is pretty much lost. But I got what the author was going for, I guess.
 
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@Limimelo Thank you, I'm glad someone understands.

@Zephyr Probably mostly Western readers, at least some, find it confusing and distracting. Well American culture at least, is super puritan. Someone could see a manga where a character is ripped to pieces via a helicopter blade and not bat an eye, but if they see female nipples they'll lose their mind. I just don't get it personally, nudity isn't a big deal.
 
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>Well American culture at least, is super puritan.

Lmao get real,most popular shows/fiction are basically orgies with a plot attached. Meanwhile Shinzo Abe's too busy trying to convince his own people to fuck each other as they have literal millions of virgin shut ins. Everyone's a puritan if you base stuff on what 60 yr olds think.
 
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I love the appearance of metaphors in her dreams/memories like the lilies sprouting around her after their moment.
 
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Oh so she's the reason why she still can't go up to heaven... Aaaaaah the feeeels my kokoro T-T.
Thank you so much!
 

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