Peerless Dad - Vol. 2 Ch. 158

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Why do the last 15 chapters or so all feel so disjointed as if missing pages or whole chapters?! Are they trying rushing the story or smth by cutting out, shortening things??
 
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Wait, how long was the timeskip?
"It hasn't even been a couple of years since we've seized this place."
 
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MC on his jrpg training arc, a journey to gather all elements!

@Nolzi Season only changed once or twice, so probably half a year.
 
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@AlphaFlow well, everything is culminating to the main conflict, I feel.
Definitely slow, but we are finally getting lore and background.
 
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It's a sign that the writing is pretty decent when it can get readers to feel some actual disappointment for a character that's slipping into self-destruction, and relieved when they show signs of improvement. Way better than some "Achilles in his tent" or existential-crisis-outta-nowhere bits. And no, I'm not reading ahead; this is fine.
 
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Thank you for the chapter! I hope he'll be able to find out a solution in henan! Praying nothing bad happens to the kids
 

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