Piccolina - Ch. 20 - Akira's Confession, Continued 2

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...why do I feel targeted by some of the slipups? :fml:

Not only was this chapter completely adorable, but the writing and pacing are also just top notch :glee:
 
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2nd time a chapter has skipped forward and started in the middle of a scene. Makes you think you missed a chapter, but no, it just is that way. Bad!

Also, I wasn't familiar with “great cousin”, but apparently it's a 3rd way to refer to the cousin of your parents, altho it's absolutely worse than “1st-cousin once-removed” which itself is worse than “2nd-uncle” (or “2nd-aunt” for females). Maybe defensible on foreignizational grounds depending upon what was used in Japanese, but even then I would've almost certainly still domesticationally gone with “second-uncle” or “2nd uncle” simply because those other terms should not exist. So bad term and definitely or argueably bad use!
 
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My face when he finally confesses...
 
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Until I reached page 6, I honestly thought there were pages missing. I’m not sure why the author decided to present the context in such a disjointed manner—maybe she was trying to save pages.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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Huh, weren't they in the middle of the date? why suddenly they meet her mom and brother in wine shop?
Did we missed chapter 19 part 2 or something?
Edit: so she said they just run into them accidentally while walking through her family's favorite store, but still, it feel disconnected from the previous chapter.
 
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The cooooooooooooonfeeeeeeeeeeeeessiiiiiiiiiiiiiiioooooooo... oh wait
 

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