Please Give Me Your Blood, I Will Serve You in Gratitude - Ch. 46 - Just Hang on a Little Longer!

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I know I'm going to have to reread this series at some point, but I can't remember why they're even there in the first place. Yet apparently it's their fault, the ones that just want to leave, that crazy bitch is protecting the place they want to leave from?

Honestly this whole thing jumped the rails a while back and I'm still trying to remember what happened to my lovey dovey semi-vampire with decent juggs story :/
 
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Cool story bro (I still don't care about Grey Rose)

I know I'm going to have to reread this series at some point, but I can't remember why they're even there in the first place. Yet apparently it's their fault, the ones that just want to leave, that crazy bitch is protecting the place they want to leave from?

Honestly this whole thing jumped the rails a while back and I'm still trying to remember what happened to my lovey dovey semi-vampire with decent juggs story :/

Grey Rose is retarded is the short story

The long story, is that one of the kids from the Dust Box escaped into the human world looking for blood in order to help his mate who was going into labor, he got his ass clapped, but fortunately the protagonist found him, Raspberry was going to report him, but Sumire decided to save him by giving him her blood, then they agreed to just save the kid

Then Grey Rose jumped the gun, came in and kidnapped them and took them to the Dust box thinking that they were going to kill the kid, or report them, so she tampered with the scene of the crime

This whole arc is filler, but is the price we must pay because if Zugoya can't insert unnecessary drama into a series he wont continue them, slice of life romance stories and big tits are not his real passion, even if they are his main selling point
 
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I know I'm going to have to reread this series at some point, but I can't remember why they're even there in the first place. Yet apparently it's their fault, the ones that just want to leave, that crazy bitch is protecting the place they want to leave from?

Honestly this whole thing jumped the rails a while back and I'm still trying to remember what happened to my lovey dovey semi-vampire with decent juggs story :/
This arc is kind of a resolution to how the story started--Sumire was just shy of getting thrown in the Dustbox due to supposed ineptitude.

Her (official) cohabitation with Ren was a way to prove to the hard-liners that living in harmony with humans was possible. This is notable because one of the main reasons for the bullshit "elite few" methodology they've been using is there being a limited supply of blood that could be gotten by feeding without humans realizing that vampires exist.

Based on Zyugoya's previous long work (Lorem's story, Musuko ga Kawaikute) this SHOULD have been handled a lot better, with A LOT more foreshadowing and/or interactions with flies before this finale (mostly after the time skip where Sumire "grew up").

The finale itself could have gone more into a kind of civil war with the lumberjacks individually sitting out or siding with the young & those wanting change vs the old guard over the lives & freedom of the vampires in the Dustbox. In my opinion, Zyugoya seemed to be setting up the vampire teacher to be the true antagonist of the manga right around the Raspberry brawl. THEN it seemed like the principal might end up being the big bad (especially with what we've been told about his strength and resistance to change).

My guess is that Zyugoya started getting tired of this manga after the "time skip". The story would have probably benefitted from a break between the halves.
 
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This arc is kind of a resolution to how the story started--Sumire was just shy of getting thrown in the Dustbox due to supposed ineptitude.

Her (official) cohabitation with Ren was a way to prove to the hard-liners that living in harmony with humans was possible. This is notable because one of the main reasons for the bullshit "elite few" methodology they've been using is there being a limited supply of blood that could be gotten by feeding without humans realizing that vampires exist.

Based on Zyugoya's previous long work, this SHOULD have been handled a lot better, with A LOT more foreshadowing and/or interactions with flies before this finale (mostly after the time skip where Sumire "grew up").

The finale itself could have gone more into a kind of civil war with the lumberjacks individually sitting out or siding with the young & those wanting change vs the old guard over the lives & freedom of the vampires in the Dustbox. In my opinion, Zyugoya seemed to be setting up the vampire teacher to be the true antagonist of the manga right around the Raspberry brawl. THEN it seemed like the principal might end up being the big bad (especially with what we've been told about his strength and resistance to change).

My guess is that Zyugoya started getting tired of this manga after the "time skip". The story would have probably benefitted from a break between the halves.
Yeah, I kinda agree with your take. Compare this to Loram's Story (Musuko ga Kawaikute Shikataganai Mazoku no Hahaoya) This one seem tame and burning out. I feeling that Zyugoya begin to feeling out from fantasy story after success of Normal+Semi-Drama story (Divorced Crybaby and Broken Childhood friend). Couple with Pixiv-Fanbox works, This manga seem to find the way to end.
 
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Most of the time I don't mind a backstory of the vilian characters, so you can sometimes get a redeeming arc......but this time I just want grey bitch to get wrecked and killed horribly. Or more purge her! 😆
 
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In case anyone missed it, Grey Rose is working as a double-agent (perhaps a triple agent), working in mutual benefit with the revolutionary faction (who likely want to use the people of the Dustbox as numbers for political leverage) but with her own personal agenda to protect it from the society Raspberry and Lotus (and the Lumberjack police force she's part of) came from. People in the Dustbox are under a very real threat of being exterminated if anything goes wrong in the upcoming revolution so she's getting violently protective.

And they're in the dustbox because she had to drag them into it in order to avoid Dahlia, who would likely find out that she's a spy.
 
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Cool story bro (I still don't care about Grey Rose)



Grey Rose is retarded is the short story

The long story, is that one of the kids from the Dust Box escaped into the human world looking for blood in order to help his mate who was going into labor, he got his ass clapped, but fortunately the protagonist found him, Raspberry was going to report him, but Sumire decided to save him by giving him her blood, then they agreed to just save the kid

Then Grey Rose jumped the gun, came in and kidnapped them and took them to the Dust box thinking that they were going to kill the kid, or report them, so she tampered with the scene of the crime

This whole arc is filler, but is the price we must pay because if Zugoya can't insert unnecessary drama into a series he wont continue them, slice of life romance stories and big tits are not his real passion, even if they are his main selling point
you're so real for that
 
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This whole arc is filler, but is the price we must pay because if Zugoya can't insert unnecessary drama into a series he wont continue them, slice of life romance stories and big tits are not his real passion, even if they are his main selling point
True, his main selling point was blue girls. It's been ages since he's had a blue girl.
 
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The author has a lot of talent for wholesome romance and tits, however isn't very good at action and drama which is their passion. Which is a shame as it's why the ending chapters of this and a few other of their works have ended up rather poor in contrast with the rest of the story.

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