Please Go Home, Akutsu-san! - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Thanks for picking this up, there are so many raw chapters out it was sad to see it untranslated. Hope you continue!
 
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@ZoddtheImmortal we are going up to chapter 5 for sure, but the rest depends on the feedback, support and satisfaction of the readers. Hope it all goes well cause i want to keep going with this manga too.
 
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I would say continue this but I feel like MC is just gonna cuck him self through out the whole series.
 
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Literally a doujin plot lmfaoooooooooooooooooooooooooo
 
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What the... This on my follow list, but i don't remember follow this at all or anything about this manga. Even after reread chapter 1 still not remember i ever read it in the first place.
 
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Please continue this, though my expectations for story/character development are mostly minimal.
 
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@MrOGZ Nice chapter, thank you for doing this :D I have a couple suggestions for you:

Put some white stroke around the text that appears outside of a speech bubble and on top of the background art. Like in the first page, the "She scares me. I want to chase her out" text. If you put a small solid white stroke around that text, it would look a bit better. The text on page 4 "That's it there's no way I'm letting her in tomorrow" has a good amount of stroke on it, though the edges of it are a little faded and a solid color might look better. But the text to the left of it, "If I'm going to be labeled as a pervert anyways then..." doesn't look good at all :x

Some punctuation would be nice too :D "That's it! There's no way I'm letting her in tomorrow." (add the punctuation mark and the period at the end) I know that the original Japanese text very rarely has punctuation in place unless there's an ellipsis or something, but it would be good to add it to make it easier to read in English.

(I do this kinda stuff for a living so I might be more critical of it than most people, but the stroke definitely needs to be added around the characters...)

If you take a look at chapter 3, which 'no group' uploaded, they did a better job of using punctuation in the speech bubbles and stroke around the background text.
 
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wow i did not see this getting picked up at all. in fact i'm surprised i even had this followed. lucky me i guess.
 

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