Ponko Tsundere na Osananajimi - Vol. 1 Ch. 8.5

[MangaDex]

 

[donkeyslayer]

very nice

 

[Tcof]

Still not catch up with what happen in the room ? need more visualization. I mean, how you actually suppose to eat doughnuts again ? chop and mix them is silly too ?

 

[jackslate]

This translation is struggling.

 

[Nosebleed]

This translation is really rough, almost unreadable at times.
@marfmamow I really really suggest you find a proofreader to make your sentences flow properly, and preferably someone to check your translation as well since I can spot tons of basic mistakes.
At the very least, read over what you wrote before you publish it or have someone else do it, because if you do you should realize half the time the sentences you wrote don't make much sense and are butchering most of the punchlines.

 

[Chizan]

She may like him, but does she have the the maturity of mind to give informed consent to a relationship? I have some doubts...

 

[anuar_kumadesu]

....i have question to myself why i still need to read this manga....it stupid and make my brain gosh loading

 

[Akikako]

Do she have the mental capacity to understand love?!

 

[1337Crimson]

noooo~

 

[daywithoutgames]

the title of page 2 is "little panic" . and if your body is lacking the iron mineral , licking iron items is good for your health .

the title of page 4 is 実 験 = test / experiment .

 

[marfmamow]

@daywithoutgames Thanks! The TL isn't fluent in Japanese and is still learning, so there will be errors. I'll fix them as soon as possible