Rebuild World - Ch. 54

[PLaci1982]

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• Page 24
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• Page 27
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[italus]

nice chap, thx!!

 

[MartasTartas]

decent translation job but it's missing the characterization each character displays which is hard to display in a translation.
curious as to what you did and how much was the fivver guy?

shuld i add the -chan ?

 

[RandomnessOfTheMathWorld]

Please

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[MartasTartas]

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• Page 24
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• Page 27
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fixed

 

[MartasTartas]

Thank you for the translation, but there's missing dialogue from Alpha on page 24 and page 27.

fixed

 

[Othymit]

decent translation job but it's missing the characterization each character displays which is hard to display in a translation.
curious as to what you did and how much was the fivver guy?

The last page says they spent 15 Euros (I assume was for the fivver)

 

[MartasTartas]

It wasn't as bad as the previous translation but it's still pretty poor. Translation groups seriously need to have at least one fluent speaker in their translated language look it over before posting. And read over it multiple times - there were more than a couple errors.

please list errors so i can fix them

 

[Kampfarsch]

Is this technically upskirt?

 

[PLaci1982]

fixed

WHATLOOKS

The one on page 27 is missing a space.

And I really don't understand what Alpha means/suggest here...
(Maybe it's only me.)

 

[VinylAT]

Were people in the old world all androids or robots or something? Did every single person have a forcefield? The fuck you mean non-lethal by old world standards?

Or did the old world just have really lax standards for "non-lethal"

We've seen the armored underwears they have in general stores. The old world is just built different.

 

[RandomnessOfTheMathWorld]

please list errors so i can fix them

Page 3, first bubble : missing punctuation ("Akira! Are you okay/alright over there!?")
Page 5, first bubble : is the * supposed to be here?
Page 7, last bubble : excusive -> exclusive
Page 11, first bubble : relic -> relics
Page 12, first bubble : shoppingd -> shopping
third bubble : missing space after comma
Page 20 4th bubble missing end point
Page 35 by the standarts -> standards
Probably missed a few but hope this helps.

 

[Rin2k]

By the looks of it, we're stuck with this TL. Hopefully OP can take the feedback from the comments and improve further on (I have no faith in trap-scans). Either that or a kind anon/another established group picks this one up soon.

 

[noticemeokita]

Can someone please give me a couple spoilers on what will happen in the story and what the fate of katsuya is

tbh i dun remember this scene, yeh they did go to untouched ruins, but no scene with yumina (at least in the wn)

 

[KnightSpark]

I swear, Katsuya had better not have done something or there's going to be flames in bound.

 

[MartasTartas]

Page 3, first bubble : missing punctuation ("Akira! Are you okay/alright over there!?")
Page 5, first bubble : is the * supposed to be here?
Page 7, last bubble : excusive -> exclusive
Page 11, first bubble : relic -> relics
Page 12, first bubble : shoppingd -> shopping
third bubble : missing space after comma
Page 20 4th bubble missing end point
Page 35 by the standarts -> standards
Probably missed a few but hope this helps.

fixed thx

 

[casefc3s]

@MartasTartas I've volunteered numerous times over this manga's life to PR; I'm more than happy to volunteer some time to make these releases the best they can be.

 

[Shinigamisama]

That was decent!

I hope the gang will be able to make good use of this opportunity and the other harem protagonist to not ruin it.

 

[cryum]

The TL was pretty good, but I find it pretty weird that it all went fine until "Trasnlation" at the very end credits.

 

[captain_crunch]

I propose renaming this series as Bodysuit World