Rebuild World - Ch. 54

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Were people in the old world all androids or robots or something? Did every single person have a forcefield? The fuck you mean non-lethal by old world standards?

Or did the old world just have really lax standards for "non-lethal"
I can easily tank that the new people's just weak as shit
 
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Is this technically upskirt?
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Doesn't count if there are pants/ suits.
 
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please list errors so i can fix them
Looks like you've sorted most of them but there are still a few.

P3 "Are you alright over there" should have a question mark.
P7 "This looks okey." should be "okay" not "okey".
P17 "So do you guys think I have no choice either?" feels weird. Something like "So, don't you guys think I have no choice too?" or "Why do you I think I have a choice then?" might be better.
 
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Yes, they shall help you too. Emergency request, since there are three of you then the cost will be 30M hehe.
 
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doesn't seems like trap-scans is behind in the raws, so I will just wait for theirs.
Trap-scans entire team left, and the last time they did it with a whole new team it was pretty bad. Nyanu should have kept it when splitting off since it was their project, anyways.
 
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Not sure about LN but Yumina & Airi didn't die after that fight in WN
Ah yeah. I forgot Airi got Alias and Yumina just disappeared after Katsuya died. They do all die in the LN though.
 
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They weren't wearing augmented suits? What suits are they wearing then? Are the designs just the same, but augmented ones pack more tech?

Akira and Katsuya (plus harem) fight to the death. Akira wins.


LN. She lives in the WN.
Which volume is that in the LN?
 

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