@Floritaner@DemonsofAkatsuki@KlausAD
On Page 11 and 12 you've clearly messed up the pronouns of the non-bubbked internal monolog. It's the General thinking, not Marl. Should be “she's”, “her”, “she”.
I find it funny that her strength isn't her direct power but her instinct to survive. She's strong because she's scared. I'm interested to see how mikagami will turn this gloomy person upside down.
It's interesting how the MC has to use everything to survive. Figuring out weaknesses to exploit and taking advantage. Love that Marl is like you aent the strongest despite knowing how strong the guy is.
Since the barrier is to protect her since she's scared she will welcome him if she's laughing which will destroy the barrier and make her let him in. This will also make her much more willing and happy to become his woman later