Retired Heroes - Ch. 12 - Onslaught

[MangaDex]

 

[Deoxyribo9]

The hero unleashed!

 

[Vasqueztion]

NB4 Tifa gets into trouble knee deep in demon shit.

 

[dreminh]

tk

 

[ultraleaf]

Was i meant to wear 3d glasses on that last page holy fuck my eyes!

 

[Garlyle]

It might just be me but I find the layout of this series....difficult to follow. Really hurts my enjoyment.

 

[Kaiju27277]

I don't know why I though of Dragon Slave.

 

[AbuHajaar]

>because this whole thing is Nihon-esque
Ayo but this is a chigganese comic tho

 

[seekermoc]

MC's finally gonna get serious, what a cliffhanger!

 

[chendu]

Tanks for the food !

 

[AMetroid]

@Kaiju27277 They're trying to save the city, not destroy it. Though jo-chan may whip out some unexpected magic before it's over.

 

[Epicredeemer]

daaaaamn

 

[CoolOtamegane]

Cliffhanger Strikes again

 

[criver]

Mary Sues intensify.

 

[Lan]

@criver do you not know the meaning of what a Mary Sue is?

 

[criver]

@Lan The question is do you. If you consider this last chapter you can see very well most of the MCs going into Mary Sue territory. Chris specifically. Do you need a breakdown page by page, or can you figure it out on your own?

 

[kuma]

@criver he is a hero who slay demon kings with small parties... it will made less sense if he isn't powerful...

anyways, it's not dragged out, and it's pretty strighforward... quite liking this...

 

[criver]

@kuma
You can have a strong character without making him a Mary Sue/Gary Stu. There's basically no suspense when you know everything will fall right into place.

 

[kuma]

@criver this is a story when final boss already defeated... i think secret stronger final boss would be more cliche than OP character...

 

[Pilatypus]

@kuma There will be secret stronger final boss...
Politics.