Retired Heroes - Ch. 29 - Lover's Day (Heroes + Angels)

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This is true. Some people don't seem to realize you need chapters to cover the lore in the world, to make it more rich and interesting. This one did this showing the point of view from 3 races about a holiday and its origins.
 
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Not only do we have bashful demon wife, but also innocent questions over religious dogma. I appreciate.
 
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oh god saliy please you're killing me

too cute angry dere demon wife
 
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"Whoever told you about this holiday didn't like you." Nyuk nyuk.
 
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I don't care about these winged people they are an after thought until they meet the main cast inserting anything else about them is irrelevant while I do like lore and world building for a monthly series though it's better to focus on main cast or plot and insert it after these characters are relevant in some way. All they are is a possible threat to mc's but we don't know until plot progresses they are a waste of pages in my opinion what made it worse is I didn't get to see Saliy give Chris the cake but an irrelevant angel get a gift so which might be why I'm a bit too upset over it.
 

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