Rise of the Demon King - Ch. 1 - A Fair Fight?

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Jesus, her eyes are the size of tennis balls, WTF.
 
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well. Chinese things...

looks great at first, then they ruined it with lame comedy.

i don't mind joke or comedy, but it just didn't really fit in.

light or soft joke might be good. since it was a fighting/Action.

but putting a Hard-trying joke, it just lame.
 
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Donkey MVP!

Also.. is this really the first chapter ? I asume that girl is the girl he was said to have seduced.. But we know nothing about her nor when he saved her ? nor what she saved her from or why shes looking into him. Lacking context here. Like a missing chapter
 

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