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There are series where the MC's anger is justified, but this one isn't one of them.
Also, the two-year timeskip is a cop-out by the author in order to avoid putting her in any good light, since we still need the thin veneer of justification for the MC's anger. You know that during the time the guildmaster has been trying to explain things to him, and the old childhood friend has obviously been trying to figure out how to approach him but the MC doesn't want to listen to anyone.
We can see that there is no betrayal. We see her side of things. We know why she did what she did, and we know what she meant to do. I mean, the MC understands what she meant initially, and we know she didn't know that the dragon was there. It's also massively on him for doing no research on an area he is going out to forage at. I mean, he was the logistics guy for an A-class party, but he couldn't figure out that a SS+ class dragon inhabited an area. Please.
It's just poor writing.
Also, the two-year timeskip is a cop-out by the author in order to avoid putting her in any good light, since we still need the thin veneer of justification for the MC's anger. You know that during the time the guildmaster has been trying to explain things to him, and the old childhood friend has obviously been trying to figure out how to approach him but the MC doesn't want to listen to anyone.
We can see that there is no betrayal. We see her side of things. We know why she did what she did, and we know what she meant to do. I mean, the MC understands what she meant initially, and we know she didn't know that the dragon was there. It's also massively on him for doing no research on an area he is going out to forage at. I mean, he was the logistics guy for an A-class party, but he couldn't figure out that a SS+ class dragon inhabited an area. Please.
It's just poor writing.
