S-Rank Party Kara Kaikosareta [Jugushi] ~"Noroi no Item" Shika Tsukuremasen ga, Sono Seinou wa Artifact-kyuu nari......!~ - Ch. 37.1

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Some funky dialogue and typos here.
  • Page 9: "It's... coming out... deadly destruction" makes zero sense
  • Page 11: "Why did I brought him here..." should be "Why did I bring him here..."

Also, Gaile being wrapped by tentacles is off my bingo card finally.
 
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Would love if one day, an author would kill off their protag that we've been following for so long, just to mess with all of our expectations.
I think I saw one maybe two story like that but they made the switch at the end of the first chapter or something like that
What is needed is a whole full volume, you follow them a whole volume where it's a legit story and then BOOM, they die, the power of friendship failing them, hard.
More than a volume, would just kill the interest, and you have to feel that something is wrong the whole time
 
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Limb regen is OP.

Second thoughts are so fun.

Would love if one day, an author would kill off their protag that we've been following for so long, just to mess with all of our expectations.
But that requires originality.
 

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