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Some funky dialogue and typos here.
Also, Gaile being wrapped by tentacles is off my bingo card finally.
- Page 9: "It's... coming out... deadly destruction" makes zero sense
- Page 11: "Why did I brought him here..." should be "Why did I bring him here..."
Also, Gaile being wrapped by tentacles is off my bingo card finally.