yes.So was that remark about romcom FMCs not being real a meta comment or a statement from the author directed at his audience. We didn't need to hear that
Boy, are some of y'all gonna be surprised.Petty ass dudes starting to getting jealous💀💀
So was that remark about romcom FMCs not being real a meta comment or a statement from the author directed at his audience. We didn't need to hear that
Are you implying the person who wrote that is female? Bc I’m ngl that would be surprisingBoy, are some of y'all gonna be surprised.
Are you implying the person who wrote that is female? Bc I’m ngl that would be surprising
Noted! Thanks for the CC. 😁Release looks good. Minor nitpicks here and there, and the proofreader could probably be a bit more aggressive about suggesting improvements ("girls like heroines in romcoms" -> "romcom-like girls", for example). Typesetting is generally OK, but could probably fill out the boxes better (most noticeable in panels like 3.2.a). The way the balloons have paragraphs is also a little awkward.
I'm kinda disappointed we're mired in Uehara's story and not getting into the whole having sex with a classmate business more. Come on, man, the entire title is about how no one knows you're banging, and it's barely a plot point.
IMO, the "improvement" example you gave sounds just as, if not more, "clunky" as original.Release looks good. Minor nitpicks here and there, and the proofreader could probably be a bit more aggressive about suggesting improvements ("girls like heroines in romcoms" -> "romcom-like girls", for example). Typesetting is generally OK, but could probably fill out the boxes better (most noticeable in panels like 3.2.a). The way the balloons have paragraphs is also a little awkward.
I'm kinda disappointed we're mired in Uehara's story and not getting into the whole having sex with a classmate business more. Come on, man, the entire title is about how no one knows you're banging, and it's barely a plot point.
That sounds convoluted as fuck...and hilarious. I'm looking forward to it.The letter is one part of a complicated plot by Shiori to generate a suspension-bridge effect between Uehara and Toyoma pushing them even closer together while leaving Kurashima reeling and vulnerable to her own designs. The plan works to an extent, but soon spins wildly out of control.
Who is Shiori?The letter is one part of a complicated plot by Shiori to generate a suspension-bridge effect between Uehara and Toyoma pushing them even closer together while leaving Kurashima reeling and vulnerable to her own designs. The plan works to an extent, but soon spins wildly out of control.
Who is Shiori?