of the chapter?that's half
I was just thinking in the previous chapter that it's hard to follow both the dialogue and the action scenes in this story.Nice, finally a chapter (or however much of it, that is) that I can actually tell who's saying what![]()
We've been on Organization Namek for a while. That in itself isn't too bad, but so much of the "sinister activity" has already occurred, happens offscreen, or is only alluded to. Aside from Ivy being a potential target, we don't really have a strong personal connection to the villains, nor do they have a strong figurehead character. We have tons of heroes, but no villains to latch onto.This arc is kinda dragging on, I hope that it refocuses back how it was in earlier chapters
Good for them. They’ve spent way too long forced to sit and watch this group take children and now it’s payback time! Huzzah!
also love that the count was stupid enough to go collect the evidence himself. I’d say it’s bad writing but he’s basically invincible in this town since half the guards and adventurers are in his pocket. Plus, that is a lot of money. I’m sure he’s worried someone might snap it up
oh and I’m not sure if we’ll see it but theres a great scene with the net in the LN
the captain declares that everyone caught is a traitor and then one guy starts crying and the captain goes. Oh. Not him. Sorry. our aim wasn’t perfect. Love it and hope we see it next time
For a chapter that talks so much about Ivy, Ivy sure isn't in it.
Can we just get back to Ivy wandering with Sora and the cat already? This arc has dragged on too way long, it's not nearly as interesting as the author thinks it is, and the only reason I'm still following this series is the hope that it'll return to the shit I actually care about at some point.