Fed-Kun's army
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- Aug 19, 2020
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There better be a compelling reason for her parents and sibilings to turn on her
This feels really forced, but okay. A family would abandon a five year old they raised lovingly for something out of her control? a person would die because they took care of a five year old?
I think this could’ve been done way better without the isekai part. Just a little kid that got screwed over. Not a isekai person who got screwed over. There’s already so much of that.This seems like it might be decent.
The isekai part Is extremely forced on there though, and It feels like It Ismissing half of the beginning since we saw nothing before they were isekai'd.