Saikyou de Saisoku no Mugen Level Up - Ch. 4 - Deadly Poison

[MangaDex]

 

[lesseffective]

She might be absolutely PON, but at least she's also a character without a shred of malice.



Unlike this Kamishiro fellow immediately appears to be.

 

[xanon]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[MerlinD]

Flashback time

 

[Chizan]

Telling father and mother something, I don't think it will be what you think it will be mc...

If cover image is anything to go by, she'll be a permanent fixture of his posse, nice...

 

[saheru]

Thanks for the translation! I would love to see somebody take the proofreading position, the English is kind of wonky right now.

 

[XicoYe]

This is bad, the plot is erratic, random stuff everywhere, illogical, yet I still read this trash (at least so far).

 

[sumipe]

Poison swamp? DAMN YOU MIYAZAKI

 

[outinthegardener]

Flashback? We're in the middle of a dungeon! I guess we're about to meet those guys if the author needs to introduce them now.

 

[Meridis]

mmmm, the basic setup is pretty dumb so it kinda needs the characters to carry it. Thing is, though I get that they are SUPPOSED to be dumb, they made that clear with his reaction to being told the restrictions from becoming famous and her being a bratty kid in over her head, do we NEED more dumb characters? Intentional and unintentional, we're pretty inundated with them. Like, he completely forgot to NOT use one of the many unique skills no one else has infront of the huge crowd.

 

[Grikath]

Ah... And there it is.... the dreaded Exposition Flashback Cliffhanger!!

 

[xSauriaNx]

inb4 those guys hired MC for faster level up then dumped him like every expulsion manga there is

 

[pandatime]

What a Gooby girl man

 

[tseng]

Flashback? We're in the middle of a dungeon! I guess we're about to meet those guys if the author needs to introduce them now.

Likely, they are pretty much in the color spread of chapter 1, so we were meeting them sooner or later lol

 

[Arx724]

He must be responsible for that

I take it this should have been something along the lines of him needing to take responsibility?
There's a few other lines that just sound... off. Like

But, why do so many monsters suddenly appear?

doesn't sound natural to me compared to "why are ... suddenly appearing". There's a bunch lines are all over the chapter that don't seem quite right to me, but maybe a native English speaker could chime in.

 

[Ndtm]

Can't unsee the sliver of the previous page at the top of page 3 & 25

 

[Nyaako]

Yeah, dropping this. Was just getting harder and harder to read and the lack of a decent proofreader isn't helping either.

 

[Kefrayba]

She did encapsulate the annoying little sister/brat character. It was a correct depiction of a bratty air-head 12 y/o. The question is how long before readers get super annoyed by the annoying character.

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

He seduced the loli and touched her all over....

She did encapsulate the annoying little sister/brat character. It was a correct depiction of a bratty air-head 12 y/o. The question is how long before readers get super annoyed by the annoying character.

Take the cunny pill and enjoy the brats.

 

[Rizkid1412]

Did her parents wanted her to die or something?