Think you nailed it this time. The text flowed naturally and was easy to read.As usual, feel free to comment if there are mistakes in this chapter.
Page 2, I feel like it'll look better if you make the center panel say "Demon Women" instead of "Demons Women". Of course, maybe each trait is meant to be read separately (they are demons and they are women), but given everything, I still have to side with "Demon Women".As usual, feel free to comment if there are mistakes in this chapter.
Done.Page 2, I feel like it'll look better if you make the center panel say "Demon Women" instead of "Demons Women". Of course, maybe each trait is meant to be read separately (they are demons and they are women), but given everything, I still have to side with "Demon Women".
AFAIK Humaniod shape has become a sign of "higher" evolution. Like the less terrifying monster a terrifying monster looks and the more human like the more scared you're supposed to be. I guess it's meant to show intelligence?Real life AI abuse and kiting. What is this, Total War Warhammer?
Also why do some artist draw their dragons as humanoids? It looks so off and not even in the disturbing "hey this is clearly some monster" but rather, in the "eww" way.
Made a forum account to say thank you for updating the translation! You're doing good work!As usual, feel free to comment if there are mistakes in this chapter.