@krellio He has good basic fluency but there is one error in the translation:
pg 3:
Uchimura: Those two don't get along, do they? (this is good and the uses contractions appropriately).
Ululu: Yes, they're on bad terms. (ERROR! You do not use "Yes...", you should use "No, they on bad terms". See below for why).
Question: Why is it technically wrong for Ululu to use "Yes, they're on bad terms"?
Answer: A negative question is one that is worded in such a way as to require a “no” response for an affirmative answer and a “yes” response for a negative answer. In other words, negative questions switch the “yes/no” response order of regular, or positive, questions to a less intuitive “no/yes” order. - sourced from www.theenglishland.com
If Uchimura had asked "Do they have a bad relationship?" then Ululu could say "Yes, they do have one" or something to that effect. This is not a negative question because it does not use the negative verb form "do not".
Don't get me wrong, for a fan made translation this is pretty good but for some reason I get a bit triggered when it comes to negative questions.