Sasayaku You ni Koi wo Utau - Vol. 12 Ch. 60.5 - Misunderstandings and a Day of Promises. + Volume 12 extras

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Mari literally being swept off her feet by Kaori did things to me.

The misunderstanding was predictable (even the breed of doggo, natch) - though the secret studying sessions being behind her absence took me by some surprise. Makes perfect sense in hindsight, of course, but.

These two are amazing together, and this chapter as a capstone for their relationship canonization is all I could ask for.

Thanks for these, as always.
 
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What can I say, it was cute and nice that they're more aware of each others now but as far as ideas go, this is truly an editor's idea if I've ever seen one, the safest and most predictable outcome
 
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What can I say, it was cute and nice that they're more aware of each others now but as far as ideas go, this is truly an editor's idea if I've ever seen one, the safest and most predictable outcome
You mean having the two who were telegraphed from their introduction as together, ending up together, was all the editor's doing?
 
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No, I meant that I've seen this twist played a hundred times and I think 99% of the readers were able to see it coming too
What "twist"? Are you talking about the course of their date? The misunderstanding about the phone call? That they end up together in the first place?

Also, no story is brand new, everything is an iteration of something that came before. I'd argue the more important point of focus is whether it's satisfying independent of how novel the plot point is.

If it wasn't for you, then just say that. But otherwise you're just speaking in these vague points that are forcibly neutral like you want to make a statement but refuse to put yourself behind it.
 
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it only takes one chapter to conclude their misunderstanding

Hey, other couples, take notes of that
 

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