Sasensareta Munou Ouji wa Jitsuryoku wo Kakushitai - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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What happened in this chapter?

Random girl made herself his maid,
head butler introduced himself,
cutaway to badguy spoiling future chapters for no reason.

Conclusion: This is not a chapter that can stand on it's own.
 
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What happened in this chapter?

Random girl made herself his maid,
head butler introduced himself,
cutaway to badguy spoiling future chapters for no reason.

Conclusion: This is not a chapter that can stand on it's own.
100%, this should've really been like 2/3 .5 chapters given slightly later down the line. It'd be real nice if they could flesh out the mc and his familiar character wise before this needless drama 😬
 
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I see LHT has improved they didn't change a characters name multiple times on the same page :haa:

Seems like the running gag here being Noah is the only one in the village that will see himself as incompetent after the next few chapters
 
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This is giving "Eminence of Shadow" vibes of MC trying to be useless.... but without any of the same heart of that story. Cid is annoying as hell, but is naturally funny and has numerous running gags for his dedication on how he appears to be useless. This guy just complains and acts like a brat without any of the other stuff.
 
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Looking too competent = gets work shoved onto him
Looking too incompetent = kicked out from the territory
Keep the balance, young man. Balance is the key.
 
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"That was an eventful conversation, for no reason"... damn, I couldn't agree more! If you're the writer and you have one of you're characters say this about the bs conversation we forced ourselves to read through, wouldn't you stop yourself and go, "yeah, maybe I shouldn't write this slapstick filler. Instead, I'll write something that's progressive to the story; that people would enjoy, and that I would enjoy writing."
 

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