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Generally in a good way. The story feel a lot more cohesive after the changes and it makes more sense. For example, in ch 76 the web version has master stalk sasha to her job for no real reason.In a good or bad way? Does it make things more or less raunchy?
The tank chapter adds a page explaining that he found out about sasha's jr idol work the night before which is why he tails her the following day.
The only really big change is to ch 84. Dinner with sasha's dad is completely rewritten and is split into 2 parts - ch 84/85. They go into Sasha's parents relationship. We actually get a canon cameo of what Sasha's mom looks like too:
