It's really nice! Thank you for the retranslation! I'm usually happy to have any translation at all, but Loli Mamoritai had some instances of pretty childish behavior. Literally dedicating pages of their scanlation to lecture their readers about how bad their takes on the manga's MC and her behavior were. (Not this manga, but another they TLed.) Sometimes the most satisfying reaction to that kind of pettiness (the most satisfying, mind you, not the most mature or the best, per se) is more pettiness.