Seikatsu Mahou wa Hazure Skill janai - Ch. 1

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No proofreader/quality checker? The English isn't that good, there's even a missing "a" (Lifestyle magic is not a worthless skill) in the title.

But the most obvious problem:
Page 21: "Manischers"
Page 23: "Manichasins", "Manichasers"

Three different spellings for the same family name, two of those even in the same panel.

Let's hope the quality picks up later, or you have the reason, why it is one of your less popular series, right there.
 
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this chapter has an insane amount of mistakes. From things like putting the words in the wrong boxes, to using the wrong words "journies", and more.

I don't understand why translator groups don't understand the importance of maintaining a standard of quality.
 
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I think this is MTL so lots of errors.
In page 25 were it reads "You're being falsely accused" it fits better "I am being falsely accused".
In page 29 "You wouldn't raise the rent after you have exorcised an evil spirit, would you?" change to "You wouldn't raise the rent after I have exorcised the evil spirit, would you?"
 
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this chapter has an insane amount of mistakes. From things like putting the words in the wrong boxes, to using the wrong words "journies", and more.

I don't understand why translator groups don't understand the importance of maintaining a standard of quality.
Many are just doing Machine Translation and using what comes out as is instead of editing it, they still do the hardest parts (cleaning and redrawing) so I can't complain to them about it, also faster releases.
 
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I thought I was having a stroke reading this. How has no-one fixed this chapter in the 10 months it's been out?
 
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it's a bit confusing reading this when sometimes the speech bubble get the order backwards, it's not even consistent. sometimes the order is right, sometimes is wrong, sometimes one guy says the line of the other

then story-wise there's the premis that nobelmen don't know about the most powerfull diety in their country....
 
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Honestly I have expected something different. I expected him to use magic like "start fire" to kill monsters from stealth or cleaning to hide his footprints or something like that. Basically for author to use his brains for creative use of utility magic.
But here "Lets give him all possible magic and trick readers with false advertising"
 
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100% another trash isekai type story from a writer with little to no writing ability copy/pasting to create this garbage.
 
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Of course, what kind of religion would bother knowing the name of their creator goddess?
 
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how does his magic have anything at all to do with "lifestyle"?
 
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@NotsoFps TLK is extremely rough as was mentioned, leaving aside TL errors, there are a lot of consistency errors, text flow errors(text goes right to left to left to right at random) and general nonsense in the text
 

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