I am quite liking the rhythm it's not too fast, nor too slow. My only gripe is the dumb monster/ability naming sense the author has (LN one, of course). Feels extremely gamey or whatever, which is kind of understandable, but also overused to the extreme, and in this type of setting they had the opportunity to name things differently (plus with MC able to create abilities, seems like a perfect fit to think a bit more?)
Besides this, iirc, watermarks are forbidden as per MangaDex's rules, has this changed in some way? because that purple splotch on the page is quite noticeable and annoying.