That dithering on the first page is kind of weird. I can't tell if it's deliberate or some kind of artifact. The red in the hair makes me think deliberate, but the fact it also applies to the volume cover in the corner makes me think artifact. If it is intentional it would look a lot better if it had been taken further and gone for the PC98 aesthetic.
At first, I thought that the representative character of this author is poop. Well, poop can be accidentally read as boob. So it's good!
(But then I realize that the author's name is some type of seaweed, Wakame seaweed)