Yeah I can't really feel the comedy anymore, this chapter especially was pretty uncomfortable. I was initially throwing this one in the "junk food" pile of insensitive humor but, now I'm wondering if the author might be cooking something. It's definitely not there yet but I don't think it's impossible for this to turn into something of value.Jesus fuck, this is getting increasingly less funny, and more depressing with every chap.
I greatly feel that the comedy part was mostly a coping mechanism for MC and the more they've started being grounded in reality, the more darker it gets.Jesus fuck, this is getting increasingly less funny, and more depressing with every chap.
It's the story they want to write not everyone is only motivated by money and "fame"I'm genuinely confused, what demographics is the author even trying to sell This to?
Yeah I can't really feel the comedy anymore, this chapter especially was pretty uncomfortable. I was initially throwing this one in the "junk food" pile of insensitive humor but, now I'm wondering if the author might be cooking something. It's definitely not there yet but I don't think it's impossible for this to turn into something of value.