Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - The Rewound Queen Will Not Dance in the Chancellor’s Hand

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hmm the fact that he also has memories implies he was the one who somehow reversed the time, and that would make me like this oneshot a little bit more so i'm going to imagine that's canon
 
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Another awkwardly executed story.... That's 3 for 3. I'd say this one was okay but it falls a bit flat because it didn't have enough content and you can totally tell this is more of a starting point then a contained short story.
 
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this anthology has been quite weak as mentioned

anyone has a link to that manga mentioned at the end?, i can't find it on MD
 
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Okay, on a re-read, maybe it is a story about a really creepy guy pursuing a girl past her afterlife, and we're supposed to be creeped out by the spectacled ponytail-wearig bastard. For all her gushing about how handsome he is, and how they had a fateful encounter in the past, she does not give in by the point where the story cuts off.
Or rather, I want to believe that, because the alternative of it being intentionally romantic story unsettles me.
 
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Mmhmm, feels too short. There's no way for me to be fond of the characters 🫠🫠
Maybe these kind of story better be a series instead of one-shot...
 
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It would have been better if the ML didn't have previous memories. He had a tragic love the first time around. The previous memories means he should have been doing things much differently that would have avoided a bad end for the queen or just straight up romanced the queen since he wasn't able to win her heart in the first go around. In the second go around, he played a passive/reactionary role as if he didn't know upcoming events. Basically he was essentially exactly the same for both times, so throwing in a memory recall for him is dumb.
 
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I didn’t like this one. I don’t understand why he murdered her and the whole keep her pretty thing was creepy. She was never actively malicious and she’s clearly capable of learning if people teach her. And even once she returned he’s weird and manipulative. At least the art was cute.
He framed it as a “mercy” killing. Basically, either the rebels would’ve killed her or the neighboring kingdom. But, you’re right, he should’ve been teaching her how to run a nation, instead of letting her be a puppet.
 
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Okay, on a re-read, maybe it is a story about a really creepy guy pursuing a girl past her afterlife, and we're supposed to be creeped out by the spectacled ponytail-wearig bastard. For all her gushing about how handsome he is, and how they had a fateful encounter in the past, she does not give in by the point where the story cuts off.
Or rather, I want to believe that, because the alternative of it being intentionally romantic story unsettles me.
Having read a ton of romance-fantasy slop, I'll say you're being very generous in your interpretation 😬 Far too often an obsessive creep like this is meant to be the lovable male lead.
 
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this feels unfinished like there'll be a second chapter so that's something to look forward to

thank you for your work, thank you for the updates 👍🏼👍🏼
 
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This one actually has a premise that could be spun out for a thriller series. Estelle is politically weak in a treacherous environment and is dependent on Cedric who is obsessively in love with her, dangerous, but also inferior in status. Execution wasn’t great, but the bones are there.
 
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That's the thing that tends to make those stories sting even worse than just plain bad ones: you have a solid premise so with the right focus it could become both interesting and not romantically rancid, but the actual work is neither of those things.
 
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Mixed feelings with this one....

Plenty of people talked about the series mentioned at the end but it got nuked off MD. Official English release coming soon though! Exciting~
 
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why people hating so much? I think it's decent

Yeah. Like the title of this work is Lady Reincarnated obtains happiness.... so basically every story thus far fits the title.
Even the summary fits. "A time-rewind anthology from ZERO-SUM focusing on stories published on Syosetu."

I used google translate. Google was positive the original language was Swahile.
 
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I really would prefer she not end up with her killer. I hate that shit. He doesn't deserve her cause of bs reasons to kill her when we can tell the truth he was just a salty bitch
 

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