Shigoto Kaeri, Dokushin no Bijin Joushi ni Tanomarete - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

[MangaDex]

 

[Pacarnya_Haruno]

1. First of all, I actually wanted to upload this chapter a few days ago. However, I wasn’t sure whether I should continue when I saw that the old group had returned. I had no intention of sniping them, which is why I waited four months before uploading Chapter 10
2. But after thinking about it again, I decided that at the very least, I would upload all the chapters I’ve already finished. I don’t want the work I’ve done over the past month to end up wasted on my tablet. That said, the image quality might not be that great, since I didn’t use a proper source. Though, 'll use the better one after Chapter 13.
3. I’ve read all of your comments, and some of you pointed out that I should look for a proofreader. Yes, I’ve actually considered that from the beginning. However, before I really do that, I want to make sure that I can stay consistent, because it wouldn’t be fair to involve someone else and make them go through the trouble of fixing things, only for me to suddenly become inconsistent due to various real-life reasons.
4. That’s all from me. Thank you for all the feedback. As for whether I should continue this after I finish uploading all the chapters I’ve already completed, I’ll leave that decision up to you.

 

[pop_x3]

I think it's fair game to continue if the old group didnt upload for almost half a year. anyway thank you for the TL

 

[BlackwingYu]

So we're just going to proceed without resolving this misunderstanding, huh. He's not gonna ask? Just gonna let it fester? Alright...

 

[razorshaleh]

DAT ASS and cosplaying as high school girl on the last page makes it even hotter

thank you for translating

 

[Hades3x]

Well she's at least trying, that's 100x better then my ex.

 

[NutzYaboku77]

So we're just going to proceed without resolving this misunderstanding, huh. He's not gonna ask? Just gonna let it fester? Alright...

Istg the last time I read a romance with erotica tag, without any messy drama. Are they just messy for me or anything that involves sex and stuff is generally heavier in terms of emotions? Am I just being a prude and need to grow up?

 

[shinshom]

She's just too precious xDDDD

 

[shinshom]

Well she's at least trying, that's 100x then my ex.

Yeah thats why its fiction..... haaaa....

 

[w3searcher]

What's with her face on 7 & 9?

So we're just going to proceed without resolving this misunderstanding, huh. He's not gonna ask? Just gonna let it fester? Alright...

Hey, these are just kids in school. You can't expect them to act like adults and talk things out. Oh, wait...

 

[BlackwingYu]

Istg the last time read a romance with erotica tag without any messy drama. Are they just messy for me or anything that involves sex and stuff is generally heavier in terms of emotions? Am I just being a prude and need to grow up?

I don't mind drama, but I wish it wasn't based on a mutual failure to communicate with each other. This is the kind of thing that gets resolved in a couple pages if the MC acts like a normal human being and asks "Hey, why did you choose me to be your partner?". The story hasn't even spent any time explaining why he hasn't asked, it just assumes that the reader will get it because we all know that everything falls apart if he does. In doing so, the plot doesn't stand on its own, it requires you to be accepting of tropes because that's the way you've been conditioned as a reader, to accept bullshit reasons to force drama in.

I have read erotica where the drama was not like this. Sometimes the relationship requires that each person doesn't know everything about the other, like the opening chapters of Nezumi no Hatsukoi. Sometimes the couple is deceiving another person, like in Kanojo no Tomodachi. Sometimes it's based on something totally unexplainable because it's supernatural, like in 108P. Sometimes there isn't a secret, but the main couple has open problems that prevent them from having a fulfilling sex life, and the drama comes from how that causes problems in their relationship despite both of them trying to resolve it, like in Amai Seikatsu. There are a TON of ways to add dramatic stakes to a story without resorting to this kiddy crap.

 

[siotechua]

Man, sometimes older women wearing school uniforms are hot

 

[Neutralside]

I would have folded

 

[Mordenheim]

I don't mind drama, but I wish it wasn't based on a mutual failure to communicate with each other. This is the kind of thing that gets resolved in a couple pages if the MC acts like a normal human being and asks "Hey, why did you choose me to be your partner?". The story hasn't even spent any time explaining why he hasn't asked, it just assumes that the reader will get it because we all know that everything falls apart if he does. In doing so, the plot doesn't stand on its own, it requires you to be accepting of tropes because that's the way you've been conditioned as a reader, to accept bullshit reasons to force drama in.

My dude, what kind of explanation(s) do you want besides the ones that have been blatantly shown? Do you really ask the author to go out of their way and spell it for you black on the white?
The MC has lived his entire life in the shadow of his more talented and successful brother...
The girls, which were approaching him in the previous chapter? -> They were just using him as stepping stone to get closer to his brother.
The job he has right now? -> He got it just because he is "this guy's" younger brother.
The woman, who wants his seed? -> She is obviously using him as proxy for his brother.

The narrative, why would he think like that, is solid. There is no real reason for him to ask, because he has already convinced himself that's the case. It's actually on the girl to convince him that this time, she is interested in him not because he is someone else's brother, but because he is his own person.

 

[shinshom]

I don't mind drama, but I wish it wasn't based on a mutual failure to communicate with each other. This is the kind of thing that gets resolved in a couple pages if the MC acts like a normal human being and asks "Hey, why did you choose me to be your partner?". The story hasn't even spent any time explaining why he hasn't asked, it just assumes that the reader will get it because we all know that everything falls apart if he does. In doing so, the plot doesn't stand on its own, it requires you to be accepting of tropes because that's the way you've been conditioned as a reader, to accept bullshit reasons to force drama in.

I have read erotica where the drama was not like this. Sometimes the relationship requires that each person doesn't know everything about the other, like the opening chapters of Nezumi no Hatsukoi. Sometimes the couple is deceiving another person, like in Kanojo no Tomodachi. Sometimes it's based on something totally unexplainable because it's supernatural, like in 108P. Sometimes there isn't a secret, but the main couple has open problems that prevent them from having a fulfilling sex life, and the drama comes from how that causes problems in their relationship despite both of them trying to resolve it, like in Amai Seikatsu. There are a TON of ways to add dramatic stakes to a story without resorting to this kiddy crap.

You are being quite superficial. This is not a simple misunderstanding, this is borderline a trauma that changed his life. He just realized that the one person that probably was different from everyone else, sees him as just another accessory to his brother (in his mind) and its so bad even his lil dude doesnt get up.
For a complexed Japanese, this feels on point honestly...

 

[MiguelH224]

If that doesn't make his dick react


Then this man is absolutely cooked

 

[frostman1214]

chapter 9, those are real human teeth, and the nose i think it is also real, quite uncanny

 

[GG334]

fuck happened on page 7?

 

[Hades3x]

Yeah thats why its fiction..... haaaa....

Yup, reality is when she gives you an annoyed and/or frustrated look and says absolutely nothing as she pulls the covers over. Then refuses to talk to you......that was 2 years ago.......

 

[Terrich]

What's with her face on 7 & 9?

Yeah it looks really weird and blurry. There's lots of other blurry places all over the chapter, too.