Shinkon Quest: Maou no Musume wa Majime Yuusha o Otoshitai ♡ - Ch. 1 - Harold The Hero

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It's another "Corporate Slave is Healed by a Big-Boobied Girl" setting, how novel.
 
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I understand people being like "huh I guess he's a slave" but I see this as a joke about how player characters have to do everything in RPGs.
in a rpg you do it because you WANT to do it, here the hero does it because it's his "duty"
 
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Ok so this is just about a guy in a black company, check......so when will the purging start....because....damn all these fuckers need to be purged.

Also monster girls are best girl! And it's heresy if you don't agree...HERESY I SAY.

But seriously the hero is making me sad, so he's a doormat of a human being, sure hope there will be purging in the future.. have I said already that there's not enough purging?
 
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"Hero, listen up." Totally sounds wrong. Way too informal. It lacks an air of pomp and circumstance you'd expect in the revelation of a prophecy. Perhaps write it as "Hark, O Hero."? It definitely has more gravitas this way.
it kinda has a parody to it
 
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The next to last chapter in the book: conquering the world.
The last chapter: the limitless power of ara ara.
 
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Book be like "Everything has the order bro, don't jump to tier 15 immediately"
 
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He been treated wrong. He got married and the first thing they ask is will it effect his work...... No congratulations , cakes or whatever......
 

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