Shounin Skill de Maoujou no Kouryaku wo Mezasu ~Isekai Tenishita no de Saikyou Item to Tookujutsu de Ikinuku to ni shita~ - Ch. 4.1 - The Demon and t…

[lolfacesayshi]

Dragon pussy

Dragon pussy

Dragon pussy

Drussy gang drussy gang drussy gang

 

[InsaneAwesomeTony]

Thanks for the chapter 🙏🏼❤️

 

[Asynchria]

Thank you for the translation!

I have one comment/question: can you please not use things like "my bad ig" in what's supposed to be spoken dialogue? Page 6, for reference. If it's a written note or text on a phone or something and it's age appropriate people writing it, then it could be acceptable... but things like that aren't ever spoken by anybody out loud so it completely takes the reader out of the scene and has them wondering "wtf is going on"

Things like that being in a translation would make people blacklist your group so they don't see anything you put out, so please try to raise your standards a bit

 

[Milanin]

I noticed that the quality was a bit different from the last translator that stopped with the broken language, only for it to be filled with brainrot and slang, along with broken language.
This manga really has no luck...

 

[Reikou]

Sussy baka. . . April fools is already over.

 

[jonsmth]

I know the Japanese tend to be shy, doubly so for otakus, but must the wish-fulfillment audience-surrogate MC be a pussy?

Is this necessary to keep the never-bloomer teenlike romance?

I mean, it's cute. If MC had no shame and hesitation, all we'll end up with is smut.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

Spineless simp needs to spray himself. What a place to pause at @Setts you big tease...

 

[Shiromon]

sussy baka on page 2

yeah, no thanks, I'll wait until someone else picks this up, I don't need zoomer brainrot in my manga

 

[harukuro]

The cliffhanger is killing me

 

[wakanana]

I mean, it's cute. If MC had no shame and hesitation, all we'll end up with is smut.

I suppose... but it's frustrating.

This could be solved by having only one love interest for the MC with whom he gets closer in a traditional courtship without fornication for a year or two, lasting a hundred chapters. You still get the shyness, but with progression, and without smut or cowardice.

 

[jonsmth]

I suppose... but it's frustrating.

This could be solved by having only one love interest for the MC with whom he gets closer in a traditional courtship without fornication for a year or two, lasting a hundred chapters. You still get the shyness, but with progression, and without smut or cowardice.

But then you don't get catgirl butt pats and sweaty dragon girl at the same time.

 

[XenoAshura]

remember, liquid courage is to be taken in moderation or else it becomes liquid stupidity...

 

[wakanana]

But then you don't get catgirl butt pats and sweaty dragon girl at the same time.

That just begs the question. Either go for smut or be wholesome. Vacillating in the middle of the crossroads leads to mediocrity.

 

[jonsmth]

That just begs the question. Either go for smut or be wholesome. Vacillating in the middle of the crossroads leads to mediocrity.

A lot of the greats actually don't go all the way. Subtleties, euphemisms, references - they would have all these but no sex nor bare nipples. Artists get to be creative with teetering the line, but not outright showing everything. It's like the difference between "panchira" and "hatenai".

 

[wakanana]

A lot of the greats actually don't go all the way. Subtleties, euphemisms, references - they would have all these but no sex nor bare nipples. Artists get to be creative with teetering the line, but not outright showing everything. It's like the difference between "panchira" and "hatenai".

I get it. Just saying, it could be done better. The softcore harem stuff ends up with the MC needing to be a coward.

 

[deadrabbits]

"sussy baka"
please don't ffs.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

Yes another irritating spineless beta simp who is unable to talk to girls. As much as I love the art and to story, I can't be doing with MCs who wet their pants and cry to mummy when a girl talks to them. [DROPPED]

 

[Kendrakirai]

Bring back the mtl, it's less horrendous than this.

 

[Didjibro]

I've been waiting for half a year... 🥹 Thank you bro!!

 

[Reader1138]

Agreed. I honestly can't believe that MTL would put in things like "sussy baka" and "my bad ig", but I suppose even machines aren't immune from being poisoned by that kind of idiotic speech.

After the "sussy bakas" bit I did keep readin, but I found another thing:

page 6, bottom left: the "my bad ig"

don't use "ig". Write "I guess." It's not like there wasn't room in the bubble for the full words, and this isn't text messages. If someone stumbles along to read this a few years later the abbreviated form may have faded from use and nobody will know what that is.

Unless you're trying to find an equivalent for Japanese slang in the original, The use of English slang in translations is one of my peeves. Especially the more fleeting or niche ones that are popular for a few months then every forgets it was ever a thing. Honstly I was scratching my head on that "my bad ig" thing, almost thought it was a typo or somehow the typesetting of the full sentence got cut off until I read Krenn's post