Shuumatsu no Harem Fantasia - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[criver]

I see that the plot has become merely a pretext for "plot".

 

[Vasqueztion]

A father who is trash, a world that is trash, a boy who knows he is trash but strives to become better. Makings of a great story, albeit used quite often.

I would have preferred the alternative direction; of the boy gaining power by any means, keeping the thought of saving the girl in his heart, only to be brought low when at the finish line he is turned away by the thing he wished for the most. Not because he isn't good enough, or strong enough, but because she herself is not. She had resigned herself to her miserable fate, used as a toy for a corrupted 'husband'. She couldn't, wouldn't, shouldn't, know her true love's warm embrace. Tainted by foul sin.
He would leave her there as she cried him away, but he would not turn inward and sulk. He would only get stronger. Stronger still. So that he may, one day, bare her burden alone.
Years later, concubines later, wars, and kingdoms later, he would return. A maddened prince, now king, drunk with corruption and power, cowers at the boy, now man, and pleads with him to spare his miserable life. He offers gold, prestige, and women. But none tempt the man, as he continues to walk down the royal carpet towards the king's demise. Suddenly, the king remembers the original boy and offers the girl, just as the man reaches his twisted throne. But the girl, she has long since passed, dead by a broken and heavy heart. The man knows this, he has long come to terms with it. He raises his blade, his judgement, for the blow. But softly, a whisper, a young girl, too young to be the princess but holding a remarkable likeness. She would be her daughter, a waif of a girl, somehow the last remaining purity in this den of darkness. She grew upon stories of the boy, nurtured by her mother's love for not only her daughter but for the boy turned man.
This would be not a story of true love, of a boy hero saving a princess. But of a man who would become a father.

Book signings will be on the 3rd and 4 of August between 8 am and 1pm. Please bring snacks.

 

[HerculeSSJ]

Savan is a true artist.

 

[Istvan90623]

@Vasqueztion Half of what you wrote is straight outta from some typical shitty hentai.

 

[Vasqueztion]

@Istvan90623
What... Hentai are you reading? Cause most of the stuff I've seen doesn't have, you know, plot. I mean, it does, but most of it revolves around fucking things or people. And I've seen a lot.

 

[firefox1234]

@Vasqueztion ignore the haters, your breif summary had more depth than 99% of what manga/LN offer these days. Compliment or insult take it however you want it ?

 

[Helio]

Author must choose one - "only true love" or "wonderful harem".
I personally hope MC grow over his love of youth.

 

[CoolOtamegane]

You cant judge this one shit, tbh.
Until the author change the MC multiple times like his *cough* alternate *cough" series.

 

[Lenk]

That's an interesting plot of tragedy that you describe doing a story like that on a dark fantasy setting will be great it has similarities with stories like the count of monte Cristo.
Regardless this one is going to be a soft core porn with a intent for plot just like the other one lol

 

[crunchyspider]

Ah yes, start with the dark elf.... mmmm.

 

[Ryuran]

@Vasqueztion make a tl;dr so I can read that shit pls.

 

[Vasqueztion]

@Ryuran
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[BobBob]

Yadda yadda story beats when does MC nut in Mocha Latte?

 

[DeusVult]

@Vasqueztion Nice, but waaay too much toxic masculinity permeating that plot. Might I suggest heaping spades of contrived angst as an alternative? /s

Seriously though, Japan seems to love their ineffective male leads. More identifiable or something, Shinji Syndrome, etc.

 

[Vasqueztion]

@DeusVult
The weaker the character, the stronger they can become. Kinda like hitting rock bottom has no where to go but up. It's for prolonged serialization. Gotta make dat cash, bro.

 

[Acolytus]

I always knew big titties were the key to ruling the world. No wonder all the dictators and conquerors in the past failed.

 

[DexHaunter]

@Vasqueztion Hey you should write a LN. I can already imagine kronix showing up in the manga adapation of your LN and calling the MC a cuck. Very nice.

 

[Kagenashi]

The power to SMACHT!

 

[Homelander]

that action ...damn damn damn.