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flxsemi Dex-chan lover Joined May 17, 2019 Messages 2,424 Oct 3, 2024 #2 Three interesting characters with clear, intersecting goals that are established in the first chapter? Solid start/10.
Three interesting characters with clear, intersecting goals that are established in the first chapter? Solid start/10.
fight2live Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 11, 2023 Messages 2,388 Oct 3, 2024 #3 solid first chapter. but this is definitely gonna end in tragedy, and i am so not looking forward to that
solid first chapter. but this is definitely gonna end in tragedy, and i am so not looking forward to that
D danbellucci Banned Joined Feb 20, 2023 Messages 941 Oct 17, 2024 #4 the old " hired killer meets and falls for a blind person" cliche