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fixed, thank you!Thanks for the chapter!
Typos & edit suggestions: @matcharuri
- p1 So last month... apparently the new hire has resigned -> So last month... apparently the new hire resigned
- p4 live in one -> live on one
- p5 I'll make it so that it goes back as it once were...! -> I'll make it so everything goes back to how it was before...! [or similar]
- p6 Right now, I'm now -> Right now, I'm
- p6 Average employee's age is -> The average employee's age is
- p6 Total number of employees is only 12. -> There are only 12 employees. // There are only 12 employees in total. // The total number of employees is only 12.
- p6 A workplace that -> It's a workplace that
- p6 Can I ask something? -> Can I ask you something?
- p8 I'm glad a talent like yourself had joined us. -> I'm glad a talent like yourself joined us. // I'm glad a talent like you joined us.
- p10 Yes... it is -> Yes... you are.
- p11 After you've left the company, I've finally realised what I've done. -> After you left the company, I finally realised what I'd done.
- p12 We were really at fault...!! -> It was entirely our fault...!! // The fault lies entirely with us...!!
- p15 Other... -> [What is this referring to?]
- p15 I wanna see what's the island's famous cuisine too -> I wanna see the island's local cuisine, too.
- p15 Please Honma. -> Please, Honma.
- p15 I'll do anything, any wish you have! -> I'll do anything, I'll fulfill any wish you have!
- p15 That's great, request me anything! -> That's great, ask me for anything! // That's great, request anything of me! [Or maybe this should be something else entirely, since this line doesn't flow into the next page at all, i.e. into Honma's "Serves you right~".]
- p20 likeability -> likability
- p21 You've just recently changed jobs too, didn't you? -> You've just recently changed jobs too, haven't you? // You just recently changed jobs too, didn't you?
- p21 a lot of a strong developers -> a lot of great developers
- p21 I was wondering what's up with that. -> I was wondering what was up with that.
- p21 The person I've always worked closely with, got fired. -> The person I'd always worked closely with, got fired.
- p21 How old fashioned. -> How old-fashioned.
- p22 He also had incredible skills -> He also has incredible skills
- p23 in exchange, I taught him back -> in exchange, I taught him