Either redo the sfx or leave the korean imo, they look bad like this.
Also you copied various parts of Meraki's translation (the final HAAAA!!! is a dead giveaway).
This is not scanlating, this is taking an english translation and putting some of your translation on it, nonsensical.
Type is also not great, that "I cannot stop" speech bubble is typed in a way too little font size, for example.