Sotsugyou Album no Kanojotachi - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[Aelthar]

Man got jacked because of the Rock. Props

 

[Azaleal]

the characters are hard to watch..

 

[Erricane]

Not gonna lie. But this is honestly genius plot. All the crushes you've missed throughout your youth reunites with you and now you need to settle who is it you're crushing on most now.

It reminds me of this one plot I thought up of where this guy was thinking who would he love more, his late wife or his current wife had they met at the same time.

 

[News13]

Here's a few I spotted after checking the raws. I only really checked the ones that looked weird in English.

Spoiler: Page 7

I have no idea what a Messe account is, but you left out the next part of that sentence which hints that he's a loner:

ぼっちだけどさ

Spoiler: Page 12

First, his nickname is "Megu-nii," not Meguru-nii (you do get this right later). Second, it looks like his "sibling" is making fun of the "memory:"

いや思い出じゃなくてめぐ兄がね

Spoiler: Page 13

There's something missing here, the second half doesn't connect properly to the first.

Spoiler: Page 19

This does not make sense at all; turns out you dropped the "km" from the raws and replaced it with "times." He ran 15 kilometers (which is nuts, especially if he did it twice a day every day).

Spoiler: Page 42

This was difficult to understand, particularly because of the second sentence which appears to contradict itself. I ran the entire thing through Google Lens and it seems like the second half of the second sentence was mistranslated; it looks like she's saying that the first sentence (finishing something in whatever form) is better than the first half of the second sentence (instead of just complaining without doing anything else). There doesn't seem anything there about any conversation.

どんな形であれ完成して世に出たのなら何もできずにぐだぐだ言うだけよりずっといいと思いもすけど

Spoiler: Also on Page 42

The raw doesn't say 10% but 100%; looks like Ootsuka's saying that the club president is a perfectionist who can't ever be satisfied with his movie:

100%完成しない部長の映画よりは面白いですよ

Spoiler: Page 49

It was just a film club, not a school.

thank you very much, I will correct them as soon as possible

 

[Grye]

This house is going to be a disaster and I'm all for it

 

[News13]

Here's a few I spotted after checking the raws. I only really checked the ones that looked weird in English.

Spoiler: Page 7

I have no idea what a Messe account is, but you left out the next part of that sentence which hints that he's a loner:

ぼっちだけどさ

Spoiler: Page 12

First, his nickname is "Megu-nii," not Meguru-nii (you do get this right later). Second, it looks like his "sibling" is making fun of the "memory:"

いや思い出じゃなくてめぐ兄がね

Spoiler: Page 13

There's something missing here, the second half doesn't connect properly to the first.

Spoiler: Page 19

This does not make sense at all; turns out you dropped the "km" from the raws and replaced it with "times." He ran 15 kilometers (which is nuts, especially if he did it twice a day every day).

Spoiler: Page 42

This was difficult to understand, particularly because of the second sentence which appears to contradict itself. I ran the entire thing through Google Lens and it seems like the second half of the second sentence was mistranslated; it looks like she's saying that the first sentence (finishing something in whatever form) is better than the first half of the second sentence (instead of just complaining without doing anything else). There doesn't seem anything there about any conversation.

どんな形であれ完成して世に出たのなら何もできずにぐだぐだ言うだけよりずっといいと思いもすけど

Spoiler: Also on Page 42

The raw doesn't say 10% but 100%; looks like Ootsuka's saying that the club president is a perfectionist who can't ever be satisfied with his movie:

100%完成しない部長の映画よりは面白いですよ

Spoiler: Page 49

It was just a film club, not a school.

Yep, most of the things have been fixed, could you please give me your opinion again, also as added many more things have been fixed than you had notified.

 

[arcane_arachnic]

Bro is COOKED

 

[arcane_arachnic]

Bro is COOKED

 

[Nivek]

this will be axed faster than tenmaku cinema

 

[iririuuu]

of course that she would only bring girls and it need to be his past loves, this story is giving me ptsd on chapter one hahahaha

 

[popo53414]

who was on phone ?

 

[auriga]

Yep, most of the things have been fixed, could you please give me your opinion again, also as added many more things have been fixed than you had notified.

It would be for the best if you could get a dedicated proofreader who can also translate. I just started seriously self-studying Japanese 5 weeks ago, lol.

 

[Articus]

Avengers the manga, if it was a rom com and had no individual movies setting up characters. Earth’s mightiest love interests.

 

[MiguelH224]

Oh great, typical MC 😮‍💨🤦🏾‍♂️

 

[MiguelH224]

You can’t say first loves when you fall in love with all those girls. Wtf bro that’s too greedy

More like, he falls in love with anything that has a vagina

 

[Nopan-san]

Im sure author is a movie nerd. This reads like a storyboard. I like it

 

[KLGChaos]

Movies... a high school who had pigtails and glasses with strawberry panties...

Why am I getting Ichigo 100% homage vibes from this?

 

[legomyy14]

this got the same vibe as tune in my heart, we got a lot of this kind of romance lately and I'm here for the ride

 

[Knighto]

this reminds me the manga about the bou that while working gets run over by a bike and gets helped by a girl, and he faintly remember her as a girl that he had a past... and then we get flashback from mostly relationships were he kinda fumbled and others where the girls did, but the story advances as he searches for the girls and learns more about them too, like closing the failed love stories, it had a great start but the end fell flat.

More like, he falls in love with anything that has a vagina

the weirdest one is the middle school one, he didn't even talk more with the girl, like bro you didn't develop shit like the other 2 girls.

 

[wallsg]

What are the odds that they will all meet again at the same university... says no one. ...

This is one of those "what are the odds" cases where it happens. The billions of other cases where it doesn't no one notices. That and there's no story if it didn't.