Souzou Renkinjutsushi wa Jiyuu wo Ouka suru: Kokyou wo Tsuihou saretara, Maou no Ohizamoto de Chouzetsu Kouka no Magic Item Tsukuri-houdai ni Narimas…

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Holy hell. I cannot fathom why people cut up comics like this except to just be giant deekwad trolls. Please stub your toe everyday for the rest of your existence.
 
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I ship it already.

Human Empire is dumb like always, only looking for combat powers when the demons aren't even hostile. bruh
 
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Is that eyebrows minetaur supposed to be female...
And this is called exaggerated hatred and exaggerated likeness...🥴🥴🥴
 
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Last page couldn't be more wrong, Reading is different but... nope will not think about this shit
 
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*ERROR

Fixes:

Is it okay... to ask the guest for this favor? (not i'm not human bla bla)

Also mc refers to her as Mabel-san and she calls mc Thor-sama (Alchemist Thor-Sama).

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Some other errors but those are the most mentions worthy.
 
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Without reading anything ahead of the first chapter (and thus without spoiling anything) I can already guess at least one early “plot twist”: despite being treated like sacrifices in the human realm, the exiled persons could have a very different reason for not returning to their unwelcoming homeland. (Instead of being treated with cruelty as initially assumed, they could have met a place where their non-combat skills are not to be discriminated against, and then why really leave?) Hence our main character is about to meet a large group of human non-combatants living their happy lives abroad.
 

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