Fed-Kun's army
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Big yikes,this site is waaaaaay far behind on chapters, but the sites I found this one either keep crashing or are overloaded with popup ads...
			
			the snow and ice goddess was mentioned in the first few chapters its no ones fault but your own for not paying attention to that and lui feng has a storage and can go back to his own world how could you not even have an inkling there would be magic. and i mean from the beginning you should've known this would be goofy af he became a city lord and a baron for 30 gold after all.So I was really enjoying this story, after initially dropping it after ~5 chapters or so due to the main character being a complete moron but then giving it another chance. It was a good, fun, silly little kingdom building story. But then, in what is possibly the most impressive bit of self-sabotage ever witnessed, around 380 chapters in, the author decides to suddenly throw magic and gods into the story. Which takes the entire thing, all of everything that has been build and shown and said so far, and throws it in the garbage.
The magic and the gods completely and utterly ruin the entire thing, and make everything the main character has accomplished completely meaningless. Trains? Who cares, we've got magic now. Electricity? Who cares, we've got magic now. Science? Who cares, we've got magic now. The main character telling people time and time again that magic and gods aren't real and science is the only thing they need? Who cares, magic and gods are suddenly real now.
It is actually incredible to see an author who is so unbelievably stupid that they would destroy their own work like this, out of nowhere, over like two chapters. You gotta be a special type of a moron to do something like that. Just take the formula you had and that was working, then burn it down because you suddenly want to have magic. It's times like this when I wish I could just reach into my monitor and smack the author in the face for being a moron.
lol you dumbAlmost a literal rip of Release that Witch. Makes me wonder if both stories are based off of another IP.
Might be worth reading if you can't get enough of RtW and wonder what it would be like if it was beastmen instead of witches and like undisguised harem.