Still Sick - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

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Hmmmmmmm. I love the struggle in this chapter. However
the words used are off by a mile. The intention is clear, but the execution of the dialog is weird. Sure it has to be to represent the struggle I suppose, but then again, it isn't even rough, like you would express feelings if you are searching for the right words.
 
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Oh okay... thought we were getting somewhere but I guess this was the two steps backwards chapter. At least one of them is out now?
 
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Rereading this years later and I absolutely forgot how much of a hormonal, commitment-averse disaster these two were 😭
 

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