Succubus ga Yattekita Ohanashi - Ch. 54 - Angry Succubus

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Where's my oversized paper fan? That lil succubus needs a good smack for her recklessness. And no I don't mean it in a perverted way to those that have dirty minds. I just don't want to hurt her to much. Just enough to help her know what she did was bad and she needs to reflect on her action
 
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Candy first, safety later :smugnako:
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He will need to install one of those fence gates in the hallway that keeps small children from entering or exiting.
 
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Small typo in panel 2: I think you meant to write cautioning, but forgot the o (still a strange way to write that sentence, but meh)
 
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Small typo in panel 2: I think you meant to write cautioning, but forgot the o (still a strange way to write that sentence, but meh)
also maybe change it to warn. I get the message but it sure is a weird word to use there
 
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Small typo in panel 2: I think you meant to write cautioning, but forgot the o (still a strange way to write that sentence, but meh)
Other than the typo itself I don't see that as a problem. By any chance are you British or otherwise learned British English? I believe that in British English "cautioning" someone usually means police informing a suspect of their rights.

In American English it doesn't really have that colloquial meaning, so it would make complete sense to tell someone, "I'm cautioning you against making that kind of decision," or something similar.
 
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MC! As a punishment she have to go to a corner with a dumb hat for an hour
 

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