Succubus Shougakusei

[Kuokkanen]

Ryuugamine Ryuuto sensei, I recommend you to buy tablet from a local store. Saves you import tax and shipping fee. Alternatively $1000 would buy you quite decent tablet.

 

[YamiryuuZero]

@Kuokkanen I would love to, but unfortunately, stores also have to pay for that tax when they purchase these products for resale.
And as if that wasn't enough, there are extra taxes for selling the imported goods in a local store and all the extra costs of workers, paperwork, tax for hiring people, electricity and water bills, etc. that stores normally have to pay on top of that cost. In the case I do happen to come across a local store that sells the tablet I want, I would end up paying even more.

 

[Zones]

@Shiromon I was unaware it was childish to have a problem with criminal stuff.

 

[CuddleStruggle]

@Zones do you also go around and have problems with manga about murder, war, violence and theft? Or you have no problems with them, despite them depicting crimes?

 

[Denrick19]

lol imagine liking this

author needs to get better at everything this shits ass dont see why anyone would read this

 

[Denrick19]

this site has horrible taste in manga i honestly dont know why in haven’t moved to another (a bit worse for scanners) way better then having to deal pedophiles and people with trash ass opinions being able to rate things

 

[mello-second]

what's this? looks like 15 y.o boy making his first ero-manga or what?

 

[Samishii23]

2 pages in and i can't stand looking at the art... Sorry author...😧

 

[Gu7]

Yeah this is just pedophilia with extra step, stay away

 

[Kuokkanen]

Youth these days, so butthurt.

 

[YamiryuuZero]

@Samishii23 Check the latest chapters. My art improves.
You an also check my most recent illustration here (https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/83919002) to see how much my art has improved since then.

I am working on character models at the moment, to make sure they look visually appealing, their designs reflect their personalities and to make sure everything stays in model going forward.

I understand my art looks pretty amateurish, but there's only one way I can improve, and that is by continuing to draw. Keep an eye out for the following chapters, and if you think there's a specific thing I can improve on, make sure to voice in the comments, I read all of them.

 

[MolaCola]

just came here to check the comments
@Denrick19 i don't believe its the site that you have a problem with
but the anime/manga community in general
@CuddleStruggle thats not the equivalent to what @Zones is talking about
there are plenty of manga that depict war in a brutal way
showing that you are killing people who may be broke and have a family to return to
the insanity that ensues
religious dogma serving as a motivator
some paint a picture of a twisted society where the values of that world's inhabitants are much different from ours
now in SAO there's a problem b/c a game developer by the name of Kayaba Akihiko is practically glorified by people like Kirito
despite being a mass murderering scumbag who has no clue why he killed so many innocent young kids (yes when asked why he trapped all these kids to die the only thoughtful response he could come up with was "I dunno")
b/c SAO is shallow in most forms people often ignore this fact, to look at the more compelling braindead rapist antagonist, an archetype that's overused... but people still find Akihiko to be quite objectionable

 

[gouder]

Goddamn this art looks terrible. I was so sure it was another shitty user-created webcomic, but then again there's a lot of no-life weeb artists pretending to be Japanese so who knows.

Never mind, not only that it turned out to be a user-created webcomic, it also was made by a Westerner trying to pass off as Japanese LMAO absolute gold.

"WATASHI WA RYUUGAMINE RYUUTO DESSSUUU~ HONMONO NO MANGAKA DESUYO~~~"
LMAO

 

[Mother_Mushroom]

why

 

[YamiryuuZero]

Thanks for your imput, @gouder.
However, I have never pretended to be Japanese for the sake of tricking people into reading my manga.
I write the manga in Japanese so I can post it on Pixiv, where the primary target audience is native Japanese speakers. I then translate the script to English, which also isn't my mother language, so I can upload to MangaDex.

if you're worried about my art being bad, don't worry, I know that better than anyone else. But that's exactly why I keep striving to be better. Just check out chapter 6 and compare with the first one, it's leagues better. I also revamped the character designs, so they should be more aesthetically pleasing from chapter 7 onward.

And by the way, Ryuugamine Ryuuto is just a pen name I chose to submit my past entries to Young Magazine back when I started, years ago. Feel free to mock it over how over the top it sounds, that's exactly why I chose that alias.

 

[CuddleStruggle]

@MolaCola umm what? He was talking about having a problem with criminal stuff. Or are you seriously implying that war, murder, violence and theft are not criminal in their nature?

 

[Denrick19]

ima be honest i forgot i made that comment 😂 that was mean for no reason my bad to whoever made this since everyone else is already shitting on you

still weird that you made this in the first place shitty premise

 

[Lingrah]

Moshi Moshi? FBI Desu?

 

[MolaCola]

@CuddleStruggle
i see you are incapable of understanding for whatever reason
luckily for you
i just saw this message now
annnnnnnd MistareFusion just did a video about brutality in the Spopovich vs Videl fight in Dragon Ball Z's Majin Buu arc
give it a watch its about 30 minutes
then don't bother coming back
b/c if you get through it there's no way you wont understand what i made clear

 

[DragonByte]

WTF is this pedobait