Sweets, Elf, And A High School Girl - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - First Anple Pie!

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Image 5, "merchandise" shouldn't be capitalized.

Image 20, "their" should be "they're."

Image 22, "backing" should be "baking," I guess.
 
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Very cute and also some ecchiness too that I wasn't expecting but I'm not opposed to it !!
 
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Þis auþor has never seen nor eaten a real apple pie, have þey?
If þe crust is so þick and hard, and þe filling so viscous, as to be able to pick up a slice and eat it in-hand þen it's over-cooked, improperly-made, garbage.
 
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Þis auþor has never seen nor eaten a real apple pie, have þey?
If þe crust is so þick and hard, and þe filling so viscous, as to be able to pick up a slice and eat it in-hand þen it's over-cooked, improperly-made, garbage.
mfers eating sloþþy ass aþþle þies over here smh
 

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