Given the subject matter, I assumed it was intentionalExtremely minor suggestion: Given the subject matter, for things like page 16, it would probably be best to not line break "therapist" into "the-
rapist".
Nah… she’s just horny...This new girl.... she's dangerous!
Yeah very amateurish writingEverything feels way too forced. I can't suspend my disbelief hard enough for this one.
Extremely minor suggestion: Given the subject matter, for things like page 16, it would probably be best to not line break "therapist" into "the-
rapist".
Just starting with the concept of the business being operated within an apartment building, with just the therapist being the only staff on site at any moment.Everything feels way too forced. I can't suspend my disbelief hard enough for this one.