Tamarowa

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we got ton of chapters of this garbage while great series are dropped, well i guess thats how life is
11 chapters in more than 9 months. A ton, yeah, right...
 
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@Tearsax i meant recently, and even so thats 9 chapters too much considering the tremendeous amount of amazing manga untranslated, but sadly not enough boobs to catch the attention i guess?

these kind of manga shouldn't exist, the narrative is close to 0 ( like every manga this author make ) and it doesnt have enough appeal to be porn, so it fails both at narrative and porn.
 
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Oh WHAT this is by the same guy who's doing tomodachi game and DEAD tube. Interesting....

I quite like Tomodachi Game but DEAD Tube is a bit of a.....ehhhh....less-on-psychological-fun-and-more-on-wacky-or-shock-factor-shit kinda thing

At least this one seems like it's leaning on more of the former.
 
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It's what @migh said, why read this when you can turn on the hentai reader?

The only thing going on here is a buch of fetishized tropes being put in the situation of an hentai but without the porn scenes. Oh wowies, they are duplicitous gold diggers, let's see how they will reveal themselves as the typical hentai knaiving sluts because it's the only thing the author can give since he graduated from doing hentai to doing hentai without porn. A wonderful and lustrous career of not even trying to do something else with your art now that you are given the opportunity.

As for the user saying is a woman to give this a pass, if you have to tell that to justify the existence of this you know it's a bad excuse.
 
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@mug3n ikr, i don't even know how this guy sell ( he sell a lot), almost all his manga except one are just basically light porn without any writings and yet people keep praising him and a lot of his manga are in the top sells of the year.

i don't know if people just have low standards or are horny kids but for the latter they are just stupid since h doujin are way better if u wanna just jack one off.
 
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@migh @mug3n

I beg to differ. I'm the type of person that lean toward story>art. You see, there are many kind of story with art like this but the story doesn't support it. When the story does support, barely people know it (Like Black Joke. Seriously, no one pick up the story even tho it's amazing 😔).

Remember if the story is bad, people will drop it like the amount of people drop a lot of shoujo manga. Good art doesn't guarantee people stay after all.

And you gotta admit, thot vs thot story is RARE. This is like psychology battle, but more ecchi and more into using woman assets (beauty, body, talent and wit) to win. You left wonder who's the criminal, how they're trying to gain favor, break the mystery and sabotage their opponents.

Basically, if there's no psychology and mystery, I abandon this manga but obviously it has something despite the lewd art. 😂
 
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And I concur with the setting not being that common, which could be an interesting story if done well. Any story can be compelling if it's done well. The problem lies in this story is awfully done, this is an hentai without porn and nothing else. I personally like Ingoshima, which is also a trash borderline hentai manga without porn but it has something else going and is fun stupid. Black Joke is a good example of a completely retarded story, but it is really fun, characters are defined with strong personalities and even a moronic story like the assasin and the escort and how he heard music when she gave head to him was very fun. This manga is not fun, at all.

The only thing we have seen here so far in 12 chapters are the same tropes and fetishes of women found in hentai with the same treatment doing what they do in hentai, which are just male sexual power fantasies. There is almost no developement and the few snippets of it is done terribly, there is no underlying background for absolutely anyone, we jump to creepy sexy situation to creepy sexy situation and we just see them try to get out peepee hard. And hentai sluts being hentai sluts, which is the least credible human character ever done. These are not characters, these are fetishized tropes, which is terrible for a character driven story like this one pretends to be. Prison School is similar to this, but it has characters, a lot of them made out of tropes yes, but at least in the first chapters thing were stablished, has stories going on and the author tried at least to be more civilized with it.

Not everyone looks for the same as us. Yeah, we might look for an interesting story but a lot of other people just want their sexual power fantasy, which is what this author can only give looking at his work. And there is a lot of public into that apparently, which for me looks like they aren't old enough to buy the real thing or maybe it's people who like the situations of an hentai but they don't want to buy that for what people around them might think of them or lying to themselves about not falling that low to buy drawn pornography like otakus.

I personally would stop beating around the bush and go directly to the real thing.
 
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@mug3n

I don't understand why you think this is just porn without nothing else when we have tons of mystery left unanswered yet. Look, I obviously will drop this series if it tits only, but there is potential it can be more.
Not to mention, your definition of borderline hentai is "fun". This story isn't supposed to be fun, it's supposed to left you wonder what development it will take. Why the heck elemination game is fun? Considering the MC in debt and stuck with criminal.

Funny you mention Prison School since I dislike it (also hate Raw Hero) because I think some of it jokes won't work if you take the art, lean too much to sexual innuendo and the last arc was too dragging. At least if you take the art of this story, it can survive (and probably even better). The characters in this story have more personality in beginning than women in Prison School too.

Do they slut? Yes. Do they have pride? No. All of these characters were horrible and obvious gold digger, but they have BRAIN. These women obviously smarter than one dimensional character in shoujo and shounen. The girls ARE fetishized, but they have distinct personality, background and reasoning. Like I said, these women live based on their assets, including their body. They didn't mind use it to get what they want is already part of early chapter. Even if this male sexual fantasy, what's the problem? It still has well written story so far. Shoujo is pretty much female romance fantasy, but if it's well written, no one have complain.

The problem is the fact that you're thinking this is hentai when it's more of survive elimination game (you know, like OTHER MANGA) that just happen to be extreme ecchi. Yes it jumps from sexy to serious to sexy, but at least the serious one didn't disrupted by ecchi art.

I understand hating the lewd art since it's not everyone taste, but disregard the fact that it has story and interesting concept?
 
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I just wanna know 1 thing......
Why is there a romance tag when it has no romance!!?
 
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can anyone say to me.... which chapter is on vol 1 and which chapter is in on vol 2?
in the chapter name... there's no volume information
 
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The ratings (1 and 10) really show what type of series this is - you either love it or hate it. Personally i hate it lol byebye
 
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This just my theory.. maybe.. the ex detective maybe acting right now. Maybe she is currently try to expose this show by "resign her job" and join the show. She is a smart detective, thats why
 
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I came for a quick lewd.. stays for the mystery and brainstorming. Yes it is borderline hentai but at least it get what imo an interesting plot.
 

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