TELOMERE - Ch. 2 - Episode 2: "Contact"

[MangaDex]

 

[CatLife]

for some reason the artwork kinda remind me of Akira

 

[Hicleric]

The characters' voice feels flat and mechanical. Not sure if that's just a translation thing, or an effect of breaking their simple statements over several panels.

Action remains decent, at least. I imagine the drip-feeding of background lore will keep up for a while.

 

[Michika]

The characters' voice feels flat and mechanical. Not sure if that's just a translation thing, or an effect of breaking their simple statements over several panels.

Action remains decent, at least. I imagine the drip-feeding of background lore will keep up for a while.

I think it's my fault, English is not my native language and I don't know how to mark they "way of speaking" in a translation

 

[TestAddress]

'Dis be good.

 

[Hicleric]

I think it's my fault, English is not my native language and I don't know how to mark they "way of speaking" in a translation

Nah, you're being a bit too hard on yourself. While there certainly is room for improvement in your translation, this chapter was particularly full of monologues (that is, characters speaking to no-one in particular) that naturally come off sounding mechanical.

 

[Michika]

Nah, you're being a bit too hard on yourself. While there certainly is room for improvement in your translation, this chapter was particularly full of monologues (that is, characters speaking to no-one in particular) that naturally come off sounding mechanical.

That's true, only 2 Characters talk in this chapters and or it's for themselves or someone who cannot respond verbally.

 

[totallytotally]

for some reason the artwork kinda remind me of Akira

It definitely owes a lot to Otomo's (and by extension BD's) paneling style. Feels really nice as a result.

 

[undeed]

looks like a cat?
to me, it looks like I'm looking at the crotch of a giantess from below

Spoiler: you know

 

[phantom95]

I have no idea what direction this is going, but I'm excited to find out.

 

[Hicleric]

looks like a cat?
to me, it looks like I'm looking at the crotch of a giantess from below

More like Watchmen's Archie or Blue Beetle's ship to me

 

[abc003262202]

I think it's my fault, English is not my native language and I don't know how to mark they "way of speaking" in a translation

I can proofread for you if you need. This manga kinda hooked me.

 

[welcome2atlantis]

How intriguing. Zombiepocalypse, then aliens came to take over?
Situation didn't look good for living humans.