Tensai Rekinjutsushi wa Kimama ni Tabi suru ~500-nengo no Sekai de Mezameta Sekai Saikou no Moto Kyuutei Renkinjutsushi, Potion Zukuri de Seijo-sama …

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Because it was a lazy low effort contradiction that should have been easily fixed? The kind of slop that your above average LLM would shit out with a below average input.
Shrug. Hardly a rare thing in manga. I'm sticking around incase the alchemy actually does something interesting instead of mashing magic energy on everything, what about you?
 
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Not excusing the poor contradictory writing, but the ingredients in her home were probably fresh to make higher quality potions, where the stuff in the item box that could degrade faster may have been an extract which would last long but not as effective.
 
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Shrug. Hardly a rare thing in manga. I'm sticking around incase the alchemy actually does something interesting instead of mashing magic energy on everything, what about you?
It's all mostly garbage nowadays. So I'll stick around for a bit and just hope it was a rough start with some passable chapters there after. Maybe the input monkey will put more effort into their next prompts... or not.
 
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What a silly contradicting plot... she returns home during the attack and complains about stale ingredients, and proceeds to make questionable potions. Obviously something goes wrong and gets put into suspended animation for an extended ammount of time. Upon waking pulls out a mobile alchemy lab that contains  fresh ingredients, then after making very similar potions to before the her unintentional long slumber, she proclaims that the mobile lab's storage has an accelerated time dilation....

Why not use the materials inside macguffin lab rather then the questionable ingredients that were stale, and if the lab's storage has an accelerated time dilation, how did the ingredients survive the extended hibernation?

I swear, these AI generated plot lines are only getting worse.
She went home to make offensive potions and the ingredients were degraded. She had access in the castle for cure/healing potions and monster repeling potions. The portable alchemist lab had the same ingredients as the castle and none of the offensive potion ingredients that she needed.
 
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She went home to make offensive potions and the ingredients were degraded. She had access in the castle for cure/healing potions and monster repeling potions. The portable alchemist lab had the same ingredients as the castle and none of the offensive potion ingredients that she needed.
Not quite sure what extra pages you've been reading, but your assertions dont match the information we received in this chapter. While there is all sorts of issues with the authors plot choices, at no point did it say in the chapter that she had a limited selection of ingredients in the palace apothecary. Or that the contents of her personal mobile lab came from the palace.

And speaking of said macguffin materials, they would be decades older then the spoiled materials in her home pantry due to its accelerated time dilation. Point in fact, it's too the point I would say the ingredients in her home pantry would have deteriorated less then those in her mobile lab. Which is why I find it so asinine that she only whips it out after the time skip.
 
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i also remember reading this exact plot before. i was fine with some hidden space and essentially freezing in time, but a house inside a castle town, and using rotten ingredients, this feels way too lazy. they could have approached this very differently, yet chose for a near identical plot to others, as previous comments show. not sure if i'm gonna keep any motivation for this.
 

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