Fed-Kun's army
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- Nov 14, 2018
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Well, the biggest problem I think, is the MC being dumb. You know, this kind of thing : "Oh, I forgot that invoking a gigantic ball of water that annihilates everything in a 2 meter radius is unusual for a 5 years old." No matter what, in most worlds, that's strange. And he keeps the act of "I need to hide my strength but somehow fail and everything is awed teehee" even though there are absolutely no reason too. I mean, hiding your abilities from your family? What for? And his sister is obviously really nice to him and all, and we see them interacting what, two times? They certainly don't appear to be as close as siblings at all... I like Isekai's manga, and even harem when it's done correctly, with real character development and so, but our MC here is plain retarded for the sake of "Wow look, he did something amazing like it was nothing!" and it's painful to read :/