@lynia
Pg- 7 “Roy is destroying and tossing stones”
‘destroying’ seems to be wrongly placed here, & he seems to be ‘throwing’ the stones, tossing means just playing around, kinda juggling, it doesn’t give the impression of putting an effort or force (don’t know if it’s intentional)
Pg-9 “ I welcome it”
It isn’t wrong, per say, it just doesn’t fit with the flow well... it’s kinda confusing... was he thankful? was he inviting him? Luring him? Praising him? This wasn’t very clear.
Pg-14 “anything will have an hole in it”
Something like-
it’s punch can plunge a hole in anything - would seem more suitable, wouldn’t it?
Pg-22 “we finally got a conclusion”
This doesn’t really gets the meaning across, something like “ at last, this concludes the fight!” Would probably fit the context better.
I feel like I ended up criticising a lot, though I’m really thankful for your efforts to scanlate this series. Please feel free to ignore any points you don’t agree with. This is just my personal opinion, I’m no expert. Thanks again, for the translations. Please keep it up!🤩
Stay safe. Take care.😊